Dude relax. Mostly we are trying to help. What you have done is great work. It just needs polishing.
You put some good stuff there, but you need an editor is all.
You put in the time.
If you'd like I can help you pull this together and edit it for you.
PM me
you spent 8 hours on this? it's fucking garbage. why would you choose such a hard to read font? why do you suck at english so bad? you didn't even pick the most damning evidence. ugh i'm so frustrated at the people telling you this is actually good.
I understand your pain man, something like this takes a lot of work and then people spend 2 minutes looking at it and criticize it.
What you need is specific advice and constructive criticism, not one-liners. I love this idea, and if it's done properly it will spread to reddit, 4chan, maybe even facebook, which is what it needs. Voat will not be enough on its own.
Here are my specific pieces of advice, take em or leave em, this is your work.
First I suggest making tinyurl links to the sources of the first 4 points, those QR codes are a great idea too. I will pull together some sources for you to make it easier. Prioritize like this: left wing MSM>right wing MSM>reputable alternative news.
Point 1:
"We know for a fact that Bill and Hillary Clinton have taken numerous flights on the "Lolita Express," the famous private jet of convicted pedophile Jeffrey Epstein. Bill has personally taken 26 flights on this jet to places like Hong Kong, Singapore, and Africa, sometimes without any secret service members."
thanks man, I did my best to try to keep it short and relevant but theres so much info relating to this story and such a small amount of space on a page its difficult to reduce it to a few paragraphs. I appreciate the constructive criticism though, for real.
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PizzaPoop ago
There's a bunch of typos and this isn't even the most hard hitting
A bunch of run-on sentences too.
As much as I love the effort we need something that will really capture the newcomers' attention
blind_sypher ago
GOD DAMMIT, I SPENT I SPENT 8 FUCKING HOURS DOING THIS. YOU UNGRATEFUL ASSWIPES.
justforthissubverse ago
Dude relax. Mostly we are trying to help. What you have done is great work. It just needs polishing. You put some good stuff there, but you need an editor is all.
You put in the time. If you'd like I can help you pull this together and edit it for you. PM me
google_is_useful ago
you spent 8 hours on this? it's fucking garbage. why would you choose such a hard to read font? why do you suck at english so bad? you didn't even pick the most damning evidence. ugh i'm so frustrated at the people telling you this is actually good.
Letsdoit ago
HEARTLESS!
blind_sypher ago
You write it better you fucking fruitcake.
KnowThyself ago
I understand your pain man, something like this takes a lot of work and then people spend 2 minutes looking at it and criticize it.
What you need is specific advice and constructive criticism, not one-liners. I love this idea, and if it's done properly it will spread to reddit, 4chan, maybe even facebook, which is what it needs. Voat will not be enough on its own.
Here are my specific pieces of advice, take em or leave em, this is your work.
First I suggest making tinyurl links to the sources of the first 4 points, those QR codes are a great idea too. I will pull together some sources for you to make it easier. Prioritize like this: left wing MSM>right wing MSM>reputable alternative news.
Point 1: "We know for a fact that Bill and Hillary Clinton have taken numerous flights on the "Lolita Express," the famous private jet of convicted pedophile Jeffrey Epstein. Bill has personally taken 26 flights on this jet to places like Hong Kong, Singapore, and Africa, sometimes without any secret service members."
Comment: We can't prove that Bill has been to the island, plus Lolita Express is catchier and easier to search in google. I emphasized the places he HAS been to plant the seed that he might be trafficking children from those locations. This is my source and I basically summarized it so if people go to the link all of the information will jive with what's in the pamphlet. (http://www.foxnews.com/us/2016/05/13/flight-logs-show-bill-clinton-flew-on-sex-offenders-jet-much-more-than-previously-known.html))
I'm gonna go ahead and post this now while I come up with suggestions for the rest of it. You're doing God's work, don't get discouraged.
jordankelly ago
Lol it's looking great so far, ppl are just saying it could still use some improvements. :) thank you for doing this, patriot
blind_sypher ago
thanks man, I did my best to try to keep it short and relevant but theres so much info relating to this story and such a small amount of space on a page its difficult to reduce it to a few paragraphs. I appreciate the constructive criticism though, for real.