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PizzaPoop ago

There's a bunch of typos and this isn't even the most hard hitting

A bunch of run-on sentences too.

As much as I love the effort we need something that will really capture the newcomers' attention

blind_sypher ago

GOD DAMMIT, I SPENT I SPENT 8 FUCKING HOURS DOING THIS. YOU UNGRATEFUL ASSWIPES.

google_is_useful ago

you spent 8 hours on this? it's fucking garbage. why would you choose such a hard to read font? why do you suck at english so bad? you didn't even pick the most damning evidence. ugh i'm so frustrated at the people telling you this is actually good.

Letsdoit ago

HEARTLESS!

blind_sypher ago

You write it better you fucking fruitcake.