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PizzaPoop ago

There's a bunch of typos and this isn't even the most hard hitting

A bunch of run-on sentences too.

As much as I love the effort we need something that will really capture the newcomers' attention

blind_sypher ago

GOD DAMMIT, I SPENT I SPENT 8 FUCKING HOURS DOING THIS. YOU UNGRATEFUL ASSWIPES.

KnowThyself ago

I understand your pain man, something like this takes a lot of work and then people spend 2 minutes looking at it and criticize it.

What you need is specific advice and constructive criticism, not one-liners. I love this idea, and if it's done properly it will spread to reddit, 4chan, maybe even facebook, which is what it needs. Voat will not be enough on its own.

Here are my specific pieces of advice, take em or leave em, this is your work.

First I suggest making tinyurl links to the sources of the first 4 points, those QR codes are a great idea too. I will pull together some sources for you to make it easier. Prioritize like this: left wing MSM>right wing MSM>reputable alternative news.

Point 1: "We know for a fact that Bill and Hillary Clinton have taken numerous flights on the "Lolita Express," the famous private jet of convicted pedophile Jeffrey Epstein. Bill has personally taken 26 flights on this jet to places like Hong Kong, Singapore, and Africa, sometimes without any secret service members."

Comment: We can't prove that Bill has been to the island, plus Lolita Express is catchier and easier to search in google. I emphasized the places he HAS been to plant the seed that he might be trafficking children from those locations. This is my source and I basically summarized it so if people go to the link all of the information will jive with what's in the pamphlet. (http://www.foxnews.com/us/2016/05/13/flight-logs-show-bill-clinton-flew-on-sex-offenders-jet-much-more-than-previously-known.html))

I'm gonna go ahead and post this now while I come up with suggestions for the rest of it. You're doing God's work, don't get discouraged.