This is very well done but I think you'll run into the general problem with normies: inability to understand allegory or example.
They will be so enraged by the last example that their rage will override your last paragraph. It'll be a "oh so you're saying..." thing where zero introspection occurs as to why they're angry. I'm not really sure how to solve that problem.
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GapingAnus ago
This is very well done but I think you'll run into the general problem with normies: inability to understand allegory or example.
They will be so enraged by the last example that their rage will override your last paragraph. It'll be a "oh so you're saying..." thing where zero introspection occurs as to why they're angry. I'm not really sure how to solve that problem.
ZenAtheist ago
It works better when you present it verbally. You can tailor it to your audience that way.
Sometimesineedhelp ago
I think if you said "yet the red cross that maintains these records states that ______" at the end it might be a teensy bit more jarring