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Drainingswamps ago

New design:

Design v4 http://dump.bitcheese.net/files/fahahop/1v4.jpg

  • Icons
  • Specialty
  • More space for text
  • Bigger font for the text
  • XP Points (or PP points ?)
  • Score categories need help from native English speaker and reduce them to 4
  • Bigger picture
  • Graphics updated

duhiki ago

Here's my editing suggestions; take them as you will.

Comet Ping Pong (CPP) Pizza restaurant owner; one of the "50 Most Powerful People in DC;" connections to high places including powerful politicians, artists, and lobbyists. Has hosted fundraisers for politicians such as Hillary Clinton. Restaurant doubles as a nighttime party place for all ages and features music by bands such as Sex Stains and Heavy Breathing. Has Instagram account with several images of children associated with money and coded sexual language, such as #chickenlovers. Never officially investigated, never asked pointed questions about his Instagram when interviewed by mainstream media, and so the citizen investigation is huge!

Love the GATA!

duhiki ago

And it should be expensive pizza, not expansive... well, I mean their menu might be expansive, but their pizza? Eh, not so much.

Drainingswamps ago

Corrected

Thanks