I would like to ask you to add some more background info; this way, the users would know some more details before actually clicking a link.
Some readers might be newbies and might not know who Savile was, please add a sentence or two about his job and the allegations against him.
Please also add a sentence about the cover-up at the BBC (readers outside the UK might not be familiar with it), and a sentence that Childline is an organization intends to help survivors of sexual abuse. (As already pointed out in the headline.)
You could also add this excerpt from your second link as a quotation:
The talk of a BBC cover-up grew louder and more insistent as it emerged that the editor of Newsnight had vetoed an earlier report into the allegations, and this, along with the fact that Savile was using BBC property to continue his dubious and possibly illegal behaviour whilst bosses turned a blind eye, has made things very uncomfortable for those individuals who were considered his colleagues at the time of the abuse - individuals such as Esther Rantzen, for example.
Rantzen has admitted that she heard the rumours at the time, referring to it as 'green room gossip', the implication being that it was classier to ignore it.
You will have 24 hours to edit, please ping one of the mods when you will have edited, we will then delete the 'Edit Warning' flair. Thank you! :-)
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think- ago
Hi @Immelda, thank you for your submission! :-)
I would like to ask you to add some more background info; this way, the users would know some more details before actually clicking a link.
Some readers might be newbies and might not know who Savile was, please add a sentence or two about his job and the allegations against him.
Please also add a sentence about the cover-up at the BBC (readers outside the UK might not be familiar with it), and a sentence that Childline is an organization intends to help survivors of sexual abuse. (As already pointed out in the headline.)
You could also add this excerpt from your second link as a quotation:
You will have 24 hours to edit, please ping one of the mods when you will have edited, we will then delete the 'Edit Warning' flair. Thank you! :-)
Immelda ago
Thank you for your input, i will certainly clean the post up in the morning as i am in bed now 😊
think- ago
Haha, ok! Sleep well! :-)
Immelda ago
Thank you, i hope this is much better now :)
think- ago
Excellent, @Immelda, thank you! :-)
I have already removed the flair.