(okay first to clarify, your work is fantastic and I can tell it took a huge amount of time. I used to do this for a job (write and design) so I will make suggestions to condense or clarify the text. Please use or not use any of these suggestions. I'm offering them since you asked not because I think its not already great. )
CARD 1 Consider changing the last two sentences to:
His Instagram account pictures young children oddly posed with money and coded sexual language. Friends comments are also incriminating. Both law enforcement and the media refuse to investigate Mr. Alefantis which only increases citizens' questions and concern.
Can you add the picture of the german baby for sale? Maybe instead of the creeoy band?
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2impendingdoom ago
(okay first to clarify, your work is fantastic and I can tell it took a huge amount of time. I used to do this for a job (write and design) so I will make suggestions to condense or clarify the text. Please use or not use any of these suggestions. I'm offering them since you asked not because I think its not already great. )
CARD 1 Consider changing the last two sentences to:
Can you add the picture of the german baby for sale? Maybe instead of the creeoy band?