You've done an awesome job, but unfortunately not a good way in a journalistic point of view. Add at least a short description into the beginning, use some more headlines to make it easy to read, write a conclusion on bases how you got to believe everything. A some kind of timeline would be nice too. Add pics. Cheers, "colleague"
A lot better now. On A rough assessment of “Low-Level Arrests” you might want to add the California arrest (AFAIK the biggest in the history of America) in the end of Jan, 427 pedos, 28 children 29 adults rescued
ah, ok :) just saw 332 and thought it was missing, so great work on that too. A couple of pics to strenghten the message and ready for sharing? And what do you think about the topic?
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anonOpenPress ago
You've done an awesome job, but unfortunately not a good way in a journalistic point of view. Add at least a short description into the beginning, use some more headlines to make it easy to read, write a conclusion on bases how you got to believe everything. A some kind of timeline would be nice too. Add pics. Cheers, "colleague"
Psychanaut ago
I just made a bunch of changes based on your feedback, thank you!
anonOpenPress ago
A lot better now. On A rough assessment of “Low-Level Arrests” you might want to add the California arrest (AFAIK the biggest in the history of America) in the end of Jan, 427 pedos, 28 children 29 adults rescued
Psychanaut ago
I did include it. I removed the arrests which were not for trafficking and pedophilia
anonOpenPress ago
ah, ok :) just saw 332 and thought it was missing, so great work on that too. A couple of pics to strenghten the message and ready for sharing? And what do you think about the topic?
Psychanaut ago
I think pics detract. the links/articles have pics. It's serious piece, not meant to be lightweight.
anonOpenPress ago
Ok for an educated audience, not ok for masses w/o a pic. But good to go.
Psychanaut ago
Can you suggest a pic in that case? I'm not sure what it should have...
anonOpenPress ago
Maybe pick a screenshot from the beginning of this video, child with tied hands https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bI7Mjruf0JQ
Psychanaut ago
Wow, amazing. Thank you...
anonOpenPress ago
Thanks goes to you on this, you made a huge amount of work gathering and checking all that data!
Psychanaut ago
I really appreciate it thank you working on the second one.
Psychanaut ago
All of the sources have tons of pics.