Writers are instructed to shoot for 8th grade level. That's how Trump won the election. Just making a point. When I was writing for a 'celebrity' alternative doc (whom I cared not a whit for) he told me the same thing, but I ignored it (and lost some assignments).
Actually yeah it is 9th grade, that's what I should've said, thanks. (No fun writing like that!).
And this intel guy actually is 'talking,' not 'writing.' Do we think he speaks legalese w/ his wife, or w/ perfect grammar?
I guess some robotic military folk would.
Military/ Gov. agency writing is completely different than normal written communication. I can tell immediately if someone is writing or has been used to writing "report style". That guy wasn't dumbing down anything, it's impossible for those people to "turn the communication switch" completely off...and this one never slipped at all...so my guess is he's lying. That was NOT the case with FBIanon. That person does at least have some experience in gov. communication style.
The key to 9th grade is short short sentences. I would be writing for a book and run my score...FUUUCK still too high...go back, edit some more, run the score again...FUUCK...sometimes it took me longer to write stupid than it did to research and compile info on what I had to write about. I even had to dumb it down for the TE wrap...and that's fucking saying something.
I listened to a compilation of things he said during the election cycle. And I was wowed at his skill in communication. When speaking to a large group of people from varied backgrounds it is useful to distill and communicate to the lowest denominator. His entire language/body language...was to communicate he said what he meant and meant what he said, it was patently honest and earnest and without a single element of "talking down to" and yet it was not a message that could ever have been seen as indirect/secretive/ or you're not smart enough to get it. He knew what people wanted was the same thing he wanted, he knew that if he kept his message simple and direct to the point and....finally...TRUTHFUL people would respond to him.
If one wants to touch base with the intellectual class, I strongly recommend reading poor Chelsea's emails. That poor thing is dumb as a fucking post. To cover their stupidity people string big words together into sentences. I can ALWAYS tell when a black "intellectual" is writing because they try too damn hard to sound smart. I was reading some of the BLM material and LMAO at the ineptness of the communication. Even when there is no visible link to "black" I can always tell. Chelsea writes like that...only even worse. I had to reread some of that shit a few times...I'm like WTF is she even trying to say.
EXAMPLE
The total of this information is completely complied in inaccessible accessibility directly to inform the public of accessibility to information they need to access information that can help them make up their minds and acclimate to the climate we desire them to acclimate to in a way that gives us control over the acclimation process.
I had to WORK at writing that stupid!
That's what it's like reading stupid people who went to college. Here's a good example if you can stomach it. I listened to the video and all I could think was WTF?
Donald Trump has the communication skills of a master. Listening to Hillary in comparison you get the idea that she's saying "you won't understand what or how I'm going to fix things, just trust me, and my vagina"...
The intellectuals...LOLOLOL I edit their asses. One famous professor got his MMS back from me so redlined I wondered had he ever even gone to school and if he had, it certainly didn't take.
Nah, that's not Chelsea verbatim, it's my imitation of her...cause I was too lazy to go find her emails to quote...but I completely nailed the writing style!
HAHA copywriting. I have done some of that, however...I do not find it easy to lie. I also tried being enthused about shit in commercials...didn't work out for me either. I'm in a state of being now that makes it impossible. And this state is also making it nearly impossible to work in EdPub as the decline in textbooks is so horrific and designed to fuck kids that ethically if some other way for me to eek a living doesn't show up for me in the next year or so I may mentally explode.
Example
I had a MMS due the 8th of November...the 8th...election day. I about fucking (pardon the explicit language but no other way to explain) lost my mind. Not only was the AMERICAN HISTORY book nearly devoid of any real...American History...the book was so biased...it devoted long paragraphs extolling the virtues of our first female president. It included graphics of how badly she beat the competition. The civil rights section had a "feature" on Ferguson that while it did have footnotes IN the feature, there were NO ACTUAL FOOTNOTES...and that feature was so horrifically inaccurate and with ZERO facts in evidence cited (he called it a peaceful protest and the murder of an innocent good boy). Facts in evidence that should have been cited would have been the court case (for academic purposes that's the ONLY acceptable sources)...it was like reading wikipedia...srlsy. Also there were literally zero demographics for white people. Literally in this book white people not only didn't exist, they didn't count. So in the education system the explanation for the white snowflakes is simple. These white students are being continually told they 1. don't count, and 2. are responsible for all horrible things that ever happen to anyone not white. Reading the civil rights section left me with 2 thoughts. 1. White kids have no civil rights because their life is always perfect because...white. and 2. Anything that ever goes wrong in the lives of black Americans is because white. That's a summary, but accurate. THAT is exactly what we're seeing on the news almost every day.
A book on the formation of the American Government (this was a college text) that had four pages...on the actual formation of the gov. A sentence or two on (ok a paragraph) on the Rev. War...and the rest of the book was so skewed to the left one would think that our founding fathers (white demons of course) were actual fucktards who did everything they ever did to actually suppress the real founders of American gov. the black man. I kid you not. I've been forced to edit out truth from features on Lincoln (because we can't teach black kids this)...and how many students actually do independent study...they are literally NOT getting any education at all and they don't know that.
So all the so called "college educated" people we see on the Internet, reddit, voat, anywhere you get a combination of "scholars" and gamers...are actually not educated in any way shape or form. And they have NO IDEA they are not educated. I tried to explain how JQAdams left home at 14 and went to Russia as an interpreter...and traveled for a few years...and brains exploded. People can't wrap their heads around that type of real world education. I advocated LIBRARIES...book, endless reading from all perspectives. Reading about WWII from US perspective, the pick up a book and read from Japanese perspective. It's all about balance. And we are seriously out of balance.
The professor who wrote that pile of shit (I also was tempted to upload that to WIKILeaks) is an absolute fucktard. Dear college kids..>WTF are you paying for? Learning should CHALLENGE you, not make you feel safe.
Re the milk article, it's good. But it's the other side of the coin. OMG RAW MILK BAD>...OMG RAW MILK BEST...two stupid positions. Humans are the only animal on the planet that continue lactating past infancy/early childhood. MANY humans lack the gene to digest any form of milk. I personally don't touch the stuff. I'm not a cow, nor an infant. I believe that for those humans for whom lactating past infancy/childhood was NOT a genetic tribal/cultural practice, that drinking that shit in any form (raw or pasteurized) is a contributor to gut issues. IMHO the only "dairy" products nongenetic milk drinkers should ever intake is fermented products like cheeses, kaffirs, butters and yogurts. It's not a popular opinion because the programming from the dairy industry is so ingrained in our society. I do agree that raw grass-fed hormone-free is best if you're going to drink it. But it's a matter of genetics if a person can tolerate it raw or not. Pasteurizing came about to1. make things a bit more hygienic, (milking a cow can be a filthy business, it's a damn cow) and 2. possibly make milk easier for more people to tolerate.I do not recommend anyone to use dairy. Some blacks from genetic milk cultures can do well, but I personally think many of the health issues, in particular gut issues have been growing in "occurrences per thousand" due to the increase and acceptance of dairy as an everyday part of life rather than the historical fermented uses or occasional drinking.
LOL ghosting for a Dr. LOL. He's kind of cute though!
LOL it's a read. Sometimes I get so damn furious that people cannot recognize they're being fucked with! When the MMS was submitted to the publisher on Nov. 8th it went with a note that "you might want to edit this"...LOL but I shouldn't have. Let them publish a book with Hilldawg as prez. Talk about proof/facts in evidence of horrific bias in education!
HAHA I let another one slide completely. Normally I'll put in a note like "is the author aware that Donald Trump is the President?" But I'm not doing that anymore. Let the fucktards publish...the snowflakes are so sheltered they may not realize who actually is president...and why. One I just finished had my brain leaking out my ear was regarding the author's attempt to be PC....so in the begining of the book she's like..for the purpose of this book gender is a feeling, and sex is a biological construct...and LOL then she goes on throughout the rest of the book using normal terms Man/Woman and gender exactly they way they are supposed to be used in science. A man has Y and a dick, a woman has X and a vag. a Hermie has a dick and a vag, and a chimera can have a dick, but enough X genes to fuck the mind. Being Hermie (aka middle sexed) used to be a HORRIFIC thing. Sex assignment was done on parental preference not SCIENCE. Now they run genetic tests prior to assigning sex. Being assigned female genitalia when you are biologically a Y was horrible. Chimera's are not as well understood, but it is entirely possible to give birth to a baby and have zero genetic connection to the child if they only do basic DNA testing. But one thing is clear. Science says tranny's are mentally imbalanced (genetic aberrations aside) period. Johns Hopkins is no longer doing sex change operations because SCIENCE has proven that that doesn't help and they have PROVEN that this is a MENTAL disorder that can be treated. This does not mean we get to be mean to people who are men but think/feel they're women or vice-versa. No one deserves to be treated like shit over stuff like this, but at the same time we do not need to be normalizing the behavior as people cannot then get help.
There is a great novel called Middle Sex, strongly recommend. Reading on the chimera syndrome is harder to find. It came to scientific light when a woman was petitioning for custody of her child in a custody case...I forget why they made her do a DNA test but the case fell apart when she came back as not genetically related to the child. Science dug deeper (yay) when there was countless eyewitness testimony and depositions stating that she indeed did give birth to that child. Seems with humans Chimeras are going to be very interesting. It is entirely possible that a person can commit a crime, leave DNA evidence and then have the DNA tested evidence prove that person did NOT commit the crime...when in fact they did.
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Mghorning ago
This sounds like a lot of hooey. His writing style is sophomoric. His e'plantations are poorly though the out. I call bulshit.
bopper ago
Writers are instructed to shoot for 8th grade level. That's how Trump won the election. Just making a point. When I was writing for a 'celebrity' alternative doc (whom I cared not a whit for) he told me the same thing, but I ignored it (and lost some assignments).
MAGABoomer ago
In EdPub the fleisch standard is 9th grade...even for college texts. It's insane. I always had to dumb down my writing.
bopper ago
Actually yeah it is 9th grade, that's what I should've said, thanks. (No fun writing like that!). And this intel guy actually is 'talking,' not 'writing.' Do we think he speaks legalese w/ his wife, or w/ perfect grammar? I guess some robotic military folk would.
MAGABoomer ago
Military/ Gov. agency writing is completely different than normal written communication. I can tell immediately if someone is writing or has been used to writing "report style". That guy wasn't dumbing down anything, it's impossible for those people to "turn the communication switch" completely off...and this one never slipped at all...so my guess is he's lying. That was NOT the case with FBIanon. That person does at least have some experience in gov. communication style.
The key to 9th grade is short short sentences. I would be writing for a book and run my score...FUUUCK still too high...go back, edit some more, run the score again...FUUCK...sometimes it took me longer to write stupid than it did to research and compile info on what I had to write about. I even had to dumb it down for the TE wrap...and that's fucking saying something.
bopper ago
“I didn't have time to write a short letter, so I wrote a long one instead.”
Very true.
"Short sentences." Yeah, like Trump. Intellectual class ridiculed him but it worked.
MAGABoomer ago
I listened to a compilation of things he said during the election cycle. And I was wowed at his skill in communication. When speaking to a large group of people from varied backgrounds it is useful to distill and communicate to the lowest denominator. His entire language/body language...was to communicate he said what he meant and meant what he said, it was patently honest and earnest and without a single element of "talking down to" and yet it was not a message that could ever have been seen as indirect/secretive/ or you're not smart enough to get it. He knew what people wanted was the same thing he wanted, he knew that if he kept his message simple and direct to the point and....finally...TRUTHFUL people would respond to him.
If one wants to touch base with the intellectual class, I strongly recommend reading poor Chelsea's emails. That poor thing is dumb as a fucking post. To cover their stupidity people string big words together into sentences. I can ALWAYS tell when a black "intellectual" is writing because they try too damn hard to sound smart. I was reading some of the BLM material and LMAO at the ineptness of the communication. Even when there is no visible link to "black" I can always tell. Chelsea writes like that...only even worse. I had to reread some of that shit a few times...I'm like WTF is she even trying to say.
EXAMPLE
I had to WORK at writing that stupid! That's what it's like reading stupid people who went to college. Here's a good example if you can stomach it. I listened to the video and all I could think was WTF?
http://downtrend.com/71superb/black-debate-team-wins-national-championship-with-gratuitous-use-of-the-n-word
Donald Trump has the communication skills of a master. Listening to Hillary in comparison you get the idea that she's saying "you won't understand what or how I'm going to fix things, just trust me, and my vagina"...
The intellectuals...LOLOLOL I edit their asses. One famous professor got his MMS back from me so redlined I wondered had he ever even gone to school and if he had, it certainly didn't take.
bopper ago
Haha, I can't pass up anything from Schiff :) I guess this debate was for real? Wow.
And that's Chelsea verbatim? That's unbelievable. Or is it.
You should get this book, by two ad copywriters back in the day (although it's apparently been revised/updated), it will crack you up. You'd love it.
https://books.google.com/books/about/Hey_Whipple_Squeeze_This.html?id=p36ErrGRq88C
I wrote a lot of articles for Dr. Group in Houston, here's one, thankfully they didn't edit it too badly. But they butchered plenty. http://www.globalhealingcenter.com/natural-health/raw-milk-vs-pasteurized-milk/
MAGABoomer ago
Nah, that's not Chelsea verbatim, it's my imitation of her...cause I was too lazy to go find her emails to quote...but I completely nailed the writing style!
HAHA copywriting. I have done some of that, however...I do not find it easy to lie. I also tried being enthused about shit in commercials...didn't work out for me either. I'm in a state of being now that makes it impossible. And this state is also making it nearly impossible to work in EdPub as the decline in textbooks is so horrific and designed to fuck kids that ethically if some other way for me to eek a living doesn't show up for me in the next year or so I may mentally explode.
Example
I had a MMS due the 8th of November...the 8th...election day. I about fucking (pardon the explicit language but no other way to explain) lost my mind. Not only was the AMERICAN HISTORY book nearly devoid of any real...American History...the book was so biased...it devoted long paragraphs extolling the virtues of our first female president. It included graphics of how badly she beat the competition. The civil rights section had a "feature" on Ferguson that while it did have footnotes IN the feature, there were NO ACTUAL FOOTNOTES...and that feature was so horrifically inaccurate and with ZERO facts in evidence cited (he called it a peaceful protest and the murder of an innocent good boy). Facts in evidence that should have been cited would have been the court case (for academic purposes that's the ONLY acceptable sources)...it was like reading wikipedia...srlsy. Also there were literally zero demographics for white people. Literally in this book white people not only didn't exist, they didn't count. So in the education system the explanation for the white snowflakes is simple. These white students are being continually told they 1. don't count, and 2. are responsible for all horrible things that ever happen to anyone not white. Reading the civil rights section left me with 2 thoughts. 1. White kids have no civil rights because their life is always perfect because...white. and 2. Anything that ever goes wrong in the lives of black Americans is because white. That's a summary, but accurate. THAT is exactly what we're seeing on the news almost every day.
A book on the formation of the American Government (this was a college text) that had four pages...on the actual formation of the gov. A sentence or two on (ok a paragraph) on the Rev. War...and the rest of the book was so skewed to the left one would think that our founding fathers (white demons of course) were actual fucktards who did everything they ever did to actually suppress the real founders of American gov. the black man. I kid you not. I've been forced to edit out truth from features on Lincoln (because we can't teach black kids this)...and how many students actually do independent study...they are literally NOT getting any education at all and they don't know that.
So all the so called "college educated" people we see on the Internet, reddit, voat, anywhere you get a combination of "scholars" and gamers...are actually not educated in any way shape or form. And they have NO IDEA they are not educated. I tried to explain how JQAdams left home at 14 and went to Russia as an interpreter...and traveled for a few years...and brains exploded. People can't wrap their heads around that type of real world education. I advocated LIBRARIES...book, endless reading from all perspectives. Reading about WWII from US perspective, the pick up a book and read from Japanese perspective. It's all about balance. And we are seriously out of balance.
The professor who wrote that pile of shit (I also was tempted to upload that to WIKILeaks) is an absolute fucktard. Dear college kids..>WTF are you paying for? Learning should CHALLENGE you, not make you feel safe.
Re the milk article, it's good. But it's the other side of the coin. OMG RAW MILK BAD>...OMG RAW MILK BEST...two stupid positions. Humans are the only animal on the planet that continue lactating past infancy/early childhood. MANY humans lack the gene to digest any form of milk. I personally don't touch the stuff. I'm not a cow, nor an infant. I believe that for those humans for whom lactating past infancy/childhood was NOT a genetic tribal/cultural practice, that drinking that shit in any form (raw or pasteurized) is a contributor to gut issues. IMHO the only "dairy" products nongenetic milk drinkers should ever intake is fermented products like cheeses, kaffirs, butters and yogurts. It's not a popular opinion because the programming from the dairy industry is so ingrained in our society. I do agree that raw grass-fed hormone-free is best if you're going to drink it. But it's a matter of genetics if a person can tolerate it raw or not. Pasteurizing came about to1. make things a bit more hygienic, (milking a cow can be a filthy business, it's a damn cow) and 2. possibly make milk easier for more people to tolerate.I do not recommend anyone to use dairy. Some blacks from genetic milk cultures can do well, but I personally think many of the health issues, in particular gut issues have been growing in "occurrences per thousand" due to the increase and acceptance of dairy as an everyday part of life rather than the historical fermented uses or occasional drinking.
LOL ghosting for a Dr. LOL. He's kind of cute though!
bopper ago
Gonna read this after lunch. Heh, the doc is hipped out huh? You did a good Chelsea (and others) impression :)
MAGABoomer ago
LOL it's a read. Sometimes I get so damn furious that people cannot recognize they're being fucked with! When the MMS was submitted to the publisher on Nov. 8th it went with a note that "you might want to edit this"...LOL but I shouldn't have. Let them publish a book with Hilldawg as prez. Talk about proof/facts in evidence of horrific bias in education!
HAHA I let another one slide completely. Normally I'll put in a note like "is the author aware that Donald Trump is the President?" But I'm not doing that anymore. Let the fucktards publish...the snowflakes are so sheltered they may not realize who actually is president...and why. One I just finished had my brain leaking out my ear was regarding the author's attempt to be PC....so in the begining of the book she's like..for the purpose of this book gender is a feeling, and sex is a biological construct...and LOL then she goes on throughout the rest of the book using normal terms Man/Woman and gender exactly they way they are supposed to be used in science. A man has Y and a dick, a woman has X and a vag. a Hermie has a dick and a vag, and a chimera can have a dick, but enough X genes to fuck the mind. Being Hermie (aka middle sexed) used to be a HORRIFIC thing. Sex assignment was done on parental preference not SCIENCE. Now they run genetic tests prior to assigning sex. Being assigned female genitalia when you are biologically a Y was horrible. Chimera's are not as well understood, but it is entirely possible to give birth to a baby and have zero genetic connection to the child if they only do basic DNA testing. But one thing is clear. Science says tranny's are mentally imbalanced (genetic aberrations aside) period. Johns Hopkins is no longer doing sex change operations because SCIENCE has proven that that doesn't help and they have PROVEN that this is a MENTAL disorder that can be treated. This does not mean we get to be mean to people who are men but think/feel they're women or vice-versa. No one deserves to be treated like shit over stuff like this, but at the same time we do not need to be normalizing the behavior as people cannot then get help.
There is a great novel called Middle Sex, strongly recommend. Reading on the chimera syndrome is harder to find. It came to scientific light when a woman was petitioning for custody of her child in a custody case...I forget why they made her do a DNA test but the case fell apart when she came back as not genetically related to the child. Science dug deeper (yay) when there was countless eyewitness testimony and depositions stating that she indeed did give birth to that child. Seems with humans Chimeras are going to be very interesting. It is entirely possible that a person can commit a crime, leave DNA evidence and then have the DNA tested evidence prove that person did NOT commit the crime...when in fact they did.