Some feedback (assuming the OP is the one who made the website): Your sli.mg links aren't working. Also, it would be nice if you underlined or otherwise highlighted the linking text so we'd know where to click.
The content seems well researched and solid. However, writing is somewhat choppy/bullet-point-y and I was a bit lost until I got to the end summary. Maybe you could add an intro following the old saying: "tell the what you're going to tell them, tell them, then tell them what you told them."
Everything was very clean and organized which I liked. The logo was great too!
I've found sli.mg to be down altogether over the last week or more? Not to say I shouldn't delete the links..
I'll go back and underline all of the clickable areas.
Yes! I've been keeping that exact saying in mind, but I guess the 'before' summary is on the previous page, and not as foreshadowing as it could be.
Glad you liked it otherwise. I've got a lot more to come and hope to bring it up to a weekly frequency.
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DefenderOfTruth ago
Some feedback (assuming the OP is the one who made the website): Your sli.mg links aren't working. Also, it would be nice if you underlined or otherwise highlighted the linking text so we'd know where to click.
The content seems well researched and solid. However, writing is somewhat choppy/bullet-point-y and I was a bit lost until I got to the end summary. Maybe you could add an intro following the old saying: "tell the what you're going to tell them, tell them, then tell them what you told them."
Everything was very clean and organized which I liked. The logo was great too!
StillTheSameOld ago
It is, so I appreciate this feedback.
I've found sli.mg to be down altogether over the last week or more? Not to say I shouldn't delete the links.. I'll go back and underline all of the clickable areas.
Yes! I've been keeping that exact saying in mind, but I guess the 'before' summary is on the previous page, and not as foreshadowing as it could be.
Glad you liked it otherwise. I've got a lot more to come and hope to bring it up to a weekly frequency.
DefenderOfTruth ago
I look forward to seeing more, then!