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Diogenes_The_Cynic ago

As someone who is new to this, and not heavily invested in the issue, I am going to make a suggestion. Take it or not.

The writing you linked to is not going to be persuasive to a regular person. Its too long, uses questionable sources, and isn't well written. Get one good solid example, and extrapolate out from that. Draw parallels to the UK Lords case. The average person would find that far more convincing, and at a lower cost of learning about the issue.