15840105? ago

Too wordy - No punch line

15839818? ago

thanks

15837898? ago

Too much to read and comprehend for the average normie. The point you are making will not be easy to grasp for most viewers.

Try something with the Fat Bastard and have him say something along the lines of Get Out Muh Syria and you will be headed towards the right direction. Brief and to the point.

15837512? ago

Constructive criticism, not a shill...

Every meme has an underlying formula. It’s what helps them have such a wide appeal. Check out other memes using the same photo and try to figure out what the formula is.

Memes work best if you start with the established formula and then try to fit your message into it. A lot of memes just take a popular photo and then someone puts their message over top of it, disregarding the formula.

Hopefully that helps!

15837131? ago

Looks good OP. This other comment here is from a Shill, just ignore that thing.

15837003? ago

god this is pure cringe. amazing you don't feel shame